This is a poster that looks very child-like. I do like the concept of depth that was shown with the letters in space and there is some eye control going on. However there is no real focal point. The word travel also seems to be stretched out, it almost hurts because there is so many directions. I do like the graphic touch on the moon, it almost looks deco to me. I also like what you did with the stars, they look really cool. What I would change is to put a set focal point and try to make a better line of sight. You did a pretty good job Jieun!
This poster looks very simple. The text that spells out "space", while impressive, has its letters a little too separate from each other: very confusing. The background is somewhat generic, but I do like the color scheme you picked for the moon, it looks neat. I also like how the stars look with the backgrounds put in them, they look really nice. The text that spells out "travel", however, doesn't really seem to match up with the other text. it just seems to detract from the poster's overall design.
Some things I like about your poster is that design on the moon...or planet I'm not sure. And the little pictures of space inside the stars is a nice touch. To make some improvements I would say get ride of the extruding on the "Space" text and fix the lettering. Also I think a picture of space would be a cool replacement for the plain blue color. Good job though
The title is all over the place. The “E” is backwards and the “A” is separated from the rest. It looks pretty cool but might be hard for some people to understand at first glance. Maybe add smaller stars in the background so the blue is not so dominant and it doesn’t look as plain. The bottom left corner works really well with the blue background and the pictures within the stars bring more color too it.
I like your concept for the poster. I like the different pictures of the stars and galaxies you have. The "A" in "Space" seems out of place to me. The "E" could also be turn around to match the other letters too. The word "Travel" seems out of place, maybe make it similar to "Space" to make it fit.
The concept is nice but i don't think its finished. To me i think there needs to be more detail or texture. Maybe stars (since you are in space) Also the word space is too spaced out and kinda difficult to read.
Who is your audience? If it's for adults, I think you can do a little more "by the book straight lines." But I like how you made your stars into a clipping mask.
This poster has a very child-like quality to it, mostly by how.... everywhere the letters are. It would have probably been better to just have them slant downwards - like how you had "Travel" - instead of switching directions and bouncing around. The text should also match each other, to keep it connected. I do, however, like how you had those very space-like pictures in the stars, its a nice contrast to the simple background.
I like how you were trying to make Space seem fun, but what was your intend with it? Who is this portraying to? I like how you made the letters for Space seem like they really are floating in space. That was really good I really like that, but I would probably move the "P" over more to the left and the "C" over to the right just a little bit so it seems more like a word. I do like the moon in corner or planet it realistic, but at the same time it looks drawn and very well detailed. Also maybe you could add stars in the background because it looks too empty just something to try.
This poster has a 1980’s feel to it. I think that is appropriate as NASA was very active then. The stars and light rays flowing downwards add to this pop-like tone, making light of a field that is actually very scientific and complicated. This is an interesting choice. However, I think there are some things that could be improved. Although I understand that the letters of “space” are floating because they are in outer space, I think it becomes distracting and hard to read with the letter E turning backwards. In fact the levitating aspect of the letters was stronger with letters S P and A, then the angle of C gets a little sharp. The bottom half of the poster could use some more spatial activation. I would try bringing the moon over more- so that it occupies more of the bottom half of the poster, and descends off more towards the right edge. This curve descending around most of the bottom half would give more visual weight to the poster. I also think there should be more detail with the light rays. It’s an interesting concept to try to illustrate light speed...I would continue with that, but maybe give more layers of light rays...some lighter weight lines along with what you have now. You could try tracing over some NASA images to get a more exact pattern or image. This will slow down the viewer more, and provide more interest as we travel throughout the poster design. What about including a backdrop of space with stars etc behind everything instead of the blue color? I think the blue is interesting and simple-creates some of the pop feel, but right now it is too flat and not interesting enough.
I feel like this needs to be pushed a little further. The whimsy of the space text right now feels a little contrived. It might be that the choice of background color seems to make the image seem flat. Perhaps if it were a little darker, to give more visual space for the letters to be "floating" in. I do like the general design of the poster though. Having "travel" mimic the cosmic rays is a nice touch.
I think the background seems empty with just the blue. I also think the images inside the stars would stand out more if the border of the stars were a little less thick. The thick yellow border takes away from the images a little bit. I like the jumbled arrangement of the word "Space".
This poster feels a little stale and empty, I would like to see more things to this poster. But I will give you credit to the imagery, I just would like to see more of it.
This is a poster that looks very child-like. I do like the concept of depth that was shown with the letters in space and there is some eye control going on. However there is no real focal point. The word travel also seems to be stretched out, it almost hurts because there is so many directions. I do like the graphic touch on the moon, it almost looks deco to me. I also like what you did with the stars, they look really cool. What I would change is to put a set focal point and try to make a better line of sight. You did a pretty good job Jieun!
ReplyDeleteThis poster looks very simple. The text that spells out "space", while impressive, has its letters a little too separate from each other: very confusing. The background is somewhat generic, but I do like the color scheme you picked for the moon, it looks neat. I also like how the stars look with the backgrounds put in them, they look really nice. The text that spells out "travel", however, doesn't really seem to match up with the other text. it just seems to detract from the poster's overall design.
ReplyDeletenice job!
Some things I like about your poster is that design on the moon...or planet I'm not sure. And the little pictures of space inside the stars is a nice touch. To make some improvements I would say get ride of the extruding on the "Space" text and fix the lettering. Also I think a picture of space would be a cool replacement for the plain blue color. Good job though
ReplyDeleteThe title is all over the place. The “E” is backwards and the “A” is separated from the rest. It looks pretty cool but might be hard for some people to understand at first glance. Maybe add smaller stars in the background so the blue is not so dominant and it doesn’t look as plain. The bottom left corner works really well with the blue background and the pictures within the stars bring more color too it.
ReplyDeleteI like your concept for the poster. I like the different pictures of the stars and galaxies you have. The "A" in "Space" seems out of place to me. The "E" could also be turn around to match the other letters too. The word "Travel" seems out of place, maybe make it similar to "Space" to make it fit.
ReplyDeleteThe concept is nice but i don't think its finished. To me i think there needs to be more detail or texture. Maybe stars (since you are in space) Also the word space is too spaced out and kinda difficult to read.
ReplyDeleteWho is your audience? If it's for adults, I think you can do a little more "by the book straight lines." But I like how you made your stars into a clipping mask.
ReplyDeleteThis poster has a very child-like quality to it, mostly by how.... everywhere the letters are. It would have probably been better to just have them slant downwards - like how you had "Travel" - instead of switching directions and bouncing around. The text should also match each other, to keep it connected. I do, however, like how you had those very space-like pictures in the stars, its a nice contrast to the simple background.
ReplyDeleteI like how you were trying to make Space seem fun, but what was your intend with it? Who is this portraying to? I like how you made the letters for Space seem like they really are floating in space. That was really good I really like that, but I would probably move the "P" over more to the left and the "C" over to the right just a little bit so it seems more like a word. I do like the moon in corner or planet it realistic, but at the same time it looks drawn and very well detailed. Also maybe you could add stars in the background because it looks too empty just something to try.
ReplyDeleteThis poster has a 1980’s feel to it. I think that is appropriate as NASA was very active then. The stars and light rays flowing downwards add to this pop-like tone, making light of a field that is actually very scientific and complicated. This is an interesting choice. However, I think there are some things that could be improved. Although I understand that the letters of “space” are floating because they are in outer space, I think it becomes distracting and hard to read with the letter E turning backwards. In fact the levitating aspect of the letters was stronger with letters S P and A, then the angle of C gets a little sharp. The bottom half of the poster could use some more spatial activation. I would try bringing the moon over more- so that it occupies more of the bottom half of the poster, and descends off more towards the right edge. This curve descending around most of the bottom half would give more visual weight to the poster. I also think there should be more detail with the light rays. It’s an interesting concept to try to illustrate light speed...I would continue with that, but maybe give more layers of light rays...some lighter weight lines along with what you have now. You could try tracing over some NASA images to get a more exact pattern or image. This will slow down the viewer more, and provide more interest as we travel throughout the poster design. What about including a backdrop of space with stars etc behind everything instead of the blue color? I think the blue is interesting and simple-creates some of the pop feel, but right now it is too flat and not interesting enough.
ReplyDeleteI feel like this needs to be pushed a little further. The whimsy of the space text right now feels a little contrived. It might be that the choice of background color seems to make the image seem flat. Perhaps if it were a little darker, to give more visual space for the letters to be "floating" in. I do like the general design of the poster though. Having "travel" mimic the cosmic rays is a nice touch.
ReplyDeleteI think the background seems empty with just the blue. I also think the images inside the stars would stand out more if the border of the stars were a little less thick. The thick yellow border takes away from the images a little bit. I like the jumbled arrangement of the word "Space".
ReplyDeleteI like the little retro feel to it. I dont know if that was your goal but I'm feeling the feel. Nice use of the Earth in the poster too! Clever.
ReplyDeleteThis poster feels a little stale and empty, I would like to see more things to this poster. But I will give you credit to the imagery, I just would like to see more of it.
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